another attempt (mild commets only)
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Good point about the second line. You're right, it's dull and doesn't "say" anything compared to the other two. Thanks for the comment.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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another attempt (mild commets only) - by addy - 12-30-2009, 05:21 PM
RE: another attempt (mild commets only) - by addy - 12-31-2009, 06:04 PM
RE: another attempt (mild commets only) - by NadCloutier - 01-21-2010, 12:51 PM
RE: another attempt (mild commets only) - by addy - 01-22-2010, 08:00 AM
RE: another attempt (mild commets only) - by . . . . - 01-29-2010, 01:22 AM



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