Summer

Summer

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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08-12-2010, 07:21 AM

nicely written addy.

i enjoyed the last line of the first verse

but loved the last line of the poem. it was delicious Wink

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Summer - by addy - 08-09-2010, 02:52 PM

RE: Summer - by Bianca Alabaster - 08-11-2010, 09:52 AM

RE: Summer - by addy - 08-11-2010, 01:57 PM

RE: Summer - by billy - 08-12-2010, 07:21 AM

RE: Summer - by addy - 08-12-2010, 09:17 AM

RE: Summer - by heslopian - 10-08-2010, 07:37 AM

RE: Summer - by addy - 10-08-2010, 09:18 AM

RE: Summer - by Leanne - 06-10-2011, 02:48 PM

RE: Summer - by kath3 - 06-11-2011, 01:30 PM

RE: Summer - by addy - 06-14-2011, 05:12 PM

RE: Summer - by critical mass - 06-30-2011, 09:04 PM

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