another attempt (mild commets only)

[NadCloutier]

Hmm, interesting. Moles stir, what the stars thaw. I like the concept of salt stars. It's a nice break from the old tale of poking holes in the canvas. Very original. I'm not sure about the second line. It seems to break up the consistancy of what I woud like to think of as a short meditation on the nature of the universe.