Sunbright by William Marsland.

[billy]

i did an edit which i thought i'd posted

it went like this ;

sunrise infects me
strokes and wakes
with oven hot mitts
making pimples sprout erect
you can see them/it
fucking up a sightless face
working in unison
an invisible tag team
slapping me around

sunrise infects me
penetrates me cock-like
fucks me over deliciously
inseminating my waking hours
with half life images
of blacks on black
spent sparklers fizzling

sunrise infects me
emotional sprinkler systems
whir and whiz
throwing imaginative waters
onto the fires of real vinaigrettes
snap shots of once seeing eyes

sunrise
has always infected me

bugger, i was sure i'd done it
anyway, i concur about the repetition.

I was trying to use half life as a reference to her length of blindness, i should have been more specific with it i think.

them is the pimples and it is the sunrise.

as always addy, thanks for the feedback.