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The Song

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The Dog's Bollocks.

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07-01-2010, 08:05 AM

I think the comments are pretty spot on. Change that one word beauty will already improve this poem tenfold Smile

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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The Song - by Therrin - 06-29-2010, 11:16 AM

RE: No title?? - by billy - 06-29-2010, 11:28 AM

RE: No title?? - by Therrin - 06-29-2010, 11:32 AM

RE: No title?? - by billy - 06-29-2010, 11:36 AM

RE: No title?? - by Therrin - 06-29-2010, 11:41 AM

RE: The Song - by addy - 07-01-2010, 08:05 AM

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