The Song

[Therrin]

i like you

does it need "i'm" on the 1st line or can we assume it's the poet?

beauty as a word should only be used as a very very last resort in a poem, as should love, hate and a host of other words

i really like the poem Therrin. not much as far as i can see that needs changing.

thanks for the read.

a poem should always have a title. even if it's a makeshift title which is going to be changed at a later day.

the above is all JMO.

yay lol thx man and yes we can assume its the poet i just do that without thinking lol... and okay i will find another word for beauty and ill think of a title...

btw what is this language u speak hahaha JMO? what that?