i like you 
does it need "i'm" on the 1st line or can we assume it's the poet?
beauty as a word should only be used as a very very last resort in a poem, as should love, hate and a host of other words
i really like the poem Therrin. not much as far as i can see that needs changing.
thanks for the read.
a poem should always have a title. even if it's a makeshift title which is going to be changed at a later day.
the above is all JMO.
does it need "i'm" on the 1st line or can we assume it's the poet?
beauty as a word should only be used as a very very last resort in a poem, as should love, hate and a host of other words
i really like the poem Therrin. not much as far as i can see that needs changing.
thanks for the read.
a poem should always have a title. even if it's a makeshift title which is going to be changed at a later day.
the above is all JMO.