06-29-2010, 11:16 AM
Since I'm a beginner you could critique to the max..
Lost in the sound
of your palpitating chest
Admiring the beauty
of the song it plays.
Lost in the rhythm that goes
one, two, three, four,
dash, infinity.
Thanks for taking your time to look at this short poem...
Lost in the sound
of your palpitating chest
Admiring the beauty
of the song it plays.
Lost in the rhythm that goes
one, two, three, four,
dash, infinity.
Thanks for taking your time to look at this short poem...

