Growing Sunrise

[billy]

my partner would love this. (she's into sunrises and sunsets )

for me it all works well.(apart from) maybe lose the first and in the last stanza.
and a little enjambment prob in the third.

the mountains
though cold in the
distance were proud here feels a little jarry
to be a backdrop
for her Majesty
Queen Sunrise

would

in the distance
the mountains
though cold
were proud
to be a backdrop
for her Majesty
Queen Sunrise


i enjoyed the imagery of a delightfully colourful poem
thanks for the read as always bianca.