Prisoner

[billy]

here's a different take on the 1st first verse LB

Lonely thoughts
Eagerly waiting to escape my mind
But, I continue to drown
In words,thoughts

Lonely
eagerly weighted thoughts
imprisoned in my mindset.
I drown
in viscous words unspoken

i did it really quick to show a different (not necessarily better) way.
what do you think ? jmo