Prisoner

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Just a few spelling error to mind LB

Lonely thoughts
Eagerly waiting to escape my mind
But, I continue to drown
In words,thoughts the word "thoughts" was repeated (or is this intentional?)

I am on mute
I want to speak
But, I keep silent
So much "many" words rushing to roll off my tongue
Yet, I`m Still Silent

burning sensation in my throat
when I swallow the words bitterly
angry thoughts surge rapidly
How could I not express
Nor Speak I noticed that you had different colorful ways of describing your thoughts (lonely, angry, waiting to escape) ... maybe it would be interesting if you make the image a full-blown personification. Have the thoughts acting as literal jailers(shadowed figures that chain you and torture you), or maybe acting as fellow prisoners in your mind. Something like that.

In a tough world, where it's barley (barely)
a strong pack together
Alone one trys (tries) to stand, but leans
I am a prisoner of my words and thoughts

Thanks for the read LB. Always eager to see your stuff