Prisoner

[billy]

Lonely thoughts
Eagerly waiting to escape my mind
But, I continue to drown
In words,thoughts

I am on mute
I want to speak
But, I keep silent
So much words rushing to roll off my tongue (many words)
Yet, I`m Still Silent

burning sensation in my throat
when I swallow the words bitterly
angry thoughts surge rapidly
How could I not express
Nor Speak

In a tough world, where it's barley
a strong pack together
Alone one trys to stand, but leans
I am a prisoner of my words and thoughts

for me there's a lot of reiteration with this one LB, that isn't needed.
could do with a few concrete images.

as far as i can see you have one verse
explained 4 different ways.

the emotion and frustration need to be shown not told.

as always it's great to see you posting.