Unwelcome
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(06-20-2010, 12:01 PM)Bianca Alabaster Wrote:  Unwelcome Villain
your evil energy will
seep into the light
first at the edges
like a slow creep
of mold growth
then, evil Villain
at the edges –
you will be [you'll be]
that flame burning
a piece of parchment

The light ochre-yellow
parchment holding
beautiful prose,
poetry and musings
will burn up like
a moth in a lantern
after you stained [stain]?
every word and
every writer
once again

Unwelcome Villain
better is the woman
who has never lived
than she to live and see [feels a little awkward B] how about;
the evil that is done [than lived to see]
under the sun.

© 6/16/2010

[poem about a yahoo poetry group where I left and then found a different site to post and then the owner of that "nasty" group recently joined the other site and I am frustrated - seems I can't escape the person.]
i read it before but never got chance to reply Bianca Sad

yes you can Wink

a good rant poem that says what you mean to say
i really like the first 4 lines of the 2nd stanza Smile
thanks for posting it. what does he do that makes him so bad?
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Messages In This Thread
Unwelcome - by Bianca Alabaster - 06-20-2010, 12:01 PM
RE: Unwelcome - by billy - 06-20-2010, 08:23 PM
RE: Unwelcome - by addy - 06-22-2010, 11:40 AM
RE: Unwelcome - by Bianca Alabaster - 06-23-2010, 12:02 PM
RE: Unwelcome - by digna_sofia - 06-23-2010, 05:03 PM
RE: Unwelcome - by billy - 06-23-2010, 07:50 PM



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