Untiltled ... mild critique

[kath3]

I like your last line in this.

I'd like to know more of what you meant with the second line, "with fading accountability". Who, or what, were you referring to? I don't think the ones who lost their innocence are the ones who lost their accountability, so I'd really like to have a better sense of your context

Thanks for the read

Thanks addy,
I see why I'm being misunderstood. This is probably how I should have wrote it ...

Gone is childlike innosence.
With fading accountability,
endlessly wanting,
endlessly searching,
endlessly gathering,
the spoils of desire
only to stuff ourselves empty

It's about starting life off with/in innocence, becoming accountable adults but getting lost along the way by getting caught up in consumerism. Ending up with a house full of stuff and lacking love, charity, the things that really matter.

Your comments are truely appreciated.