Untiltled ... mild critique
#5
I like your last line in this. Smile

I'd like to know more of what you meant with the second line, "with fading accountability". Who, or what, were you referring to? I don't think the ones who lost their innocence are the ones who lost their accountability, so I'd really like to have a better sense of your context

Thanks for the read Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Messages In This Thread
Untiltled ... mild critique - by kath3 - 06-17-2010, 08:47 AM
RE: Untiltled ... mild critique - by billy - 06-17-2010, 09:14 AM
RE: Untiltled ... mild critique - by kath3 - 06-17-2010, 03:30 PM
RE: Untiltled ... mild critique - by billy - 06-17-2010, 03:37 PM
RE: Untiltled ... mild critique - by addy - 06-17-2010, 04:37 PM
RE: Untiltled ... mild critique - by srijantje - 06-18-2010, 12:53 PM



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