Untiltled ... mild critique

[kath3]

Gone is childlike innosence
with fading accountability.
Endlessly wanting,
endlessly searching,
endlessly gathering,
the spoils of desire
only to stuff ourselves empty

innocence on the first line.

funny but i get a sense of going from one childhood to another kath
i love the irony and the futility of the last line. and our ability to do it.
period o the last line btw.
the more i read it the more i see in it, it has a certain depth to it
thanks for the read, great to see you doing a poem


would the work instead of is on the first line?

Ya I like it ... Gone the childlike innocence
not sure what you mean about getting a sense of going from one childhood to another?
Thanks for the spell-check and grammer check ... never was good at either one.
if there's anything else to add please do ... I can handle it and appreciate the help.