The Infidelity of Tourism in Atlantis
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(01-18-2010, 12:10 PM)NadCloutier Wrote:  There was a small stanza that I cut out, but didn't want to be fully disposed of it. So I chopped it up and used it as the title. I do agree, it might give off the wrong impression. IThis originally ended in a goofball way, which as you can tell ,the prior is quite lofty I guess you could say. So I cut it for the sake of consistancy
I'm not a whore. One poem at a time. :0)...Adam's bloody slit? That's just gross.
i did say it wasn't suitable lol.

hopefully we'll get more members for now me and addy will do our best to give feedback. and feel free to comment on anything you see. the choice is always yours as to when or how much to post of course Smile

maybe a few of the non poets will pop in now and again with a bit of input too.
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The Infidelity of Tourism in Atlantis - by NadCloutier - 01-18-2010, 11:16 AM
RE: The Infidelity of Tourism in Atlantis - by NadCloutier - 01-18-2010, 12:01 PM
RE: The Infidelity of Tourism in Atlantis - by NadCloutier - 01-18-2010, 12:10 PM
RE: The Infidelity of Tourism in Atlantis - by billy - 01-18-2010, 12:21 PM



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