06-09-2010, 06:52 PM
(06-09-2010, 04:39 PM)digna_sofia Wrote: I. "Nothing is true."the only thing that doesn't work for me in this corkscrew
What is a Friday
but the end of a Monday
or is it the Monday
that starts out the Friday?
It could have been both
Like night
Like day
Could be each other
no question at all.
For the nature of either
is neither
exists.
II. "Everything is permitted."
Would wrong be right
right when the left
turns to the right
wrong way we left?
To me it's false, to you correct.
But nothing is deep in bone
And nothing in stone is set
So nothing becomes despair
So nothing deserves regret
is the penultimate couplet.
anyway you look at it the bottom line of it
comes off as being a bit too blaze'-cliche. (just my opinion)
it feels nicely humdrum and at the same time hedonistic
i enjoy the way you play around with very little and produce the goods.
thanks for the read digna, as always

did i just say you lend order to chaos
