Fear

[billy]

So many ambitions
Dreams to fulfill

Yet no actions being taken
Captivated by fear‘s shadow above my bed
Waking up at the darkest hours

So many ambitions
Dreams to fulfill

I’ve walked far enough down the tunnel
The light glares at the end
I can’t seem to reach it though
Fear isn't letting me

Bags under my eyes
Black liquid mascara running down
But, that doesn’t stop me
I keep running down the tunnel

So many ambitions
Dreams to fulfill

Close to my destination
Great anticipation ahead
Yet, I’m captivated by fear

i like the repetition in this one, (normally rep is redundant, but it works in this one )
i like that while being introspective, it doesn't carry that misplaced angst that many a young persons poem do.

if you could swap a few of the cliche for a few good strong image, i think you'd have a good poem on your hands.

as always LB, thans for the read.