06-06-2010, 03:54 AM
I haven't even read a piece of poetry since grade 4 which was many moons ago lol. I read through a wack of them last night and became inspired. I haven't a single clue about poetry writing or form. Pointers and advice would be greatly appreciated.
Critique away ... bearing in mind I'm a baby.
Bold and mighty standings
Endure harshness with honor
Preserving hidden secrets
Critique away ... bearing in mind I'm a baby.

Bold and mighty standings
Endure harshness with honor
Preserving hidden secrets
You give to the world when you're giving your best to somebody else.

