frozen[comment please]

frozen[comment please]

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06-05-2010, 06:58 PM

(01-28-2010, 02:06 AM)srijantje Wrote: Frozen footprints
One by one..
No company

I like your words. As I shared with your poem Time I know absolutely nothing about poetry, haven't even read any since I was in grade 4 ( haven't been there for 46 years) until tonight and you are inspiring me to possibly attempt.

I agree with billy ... the last line seems awkward and I would enjoy hearing a longer version. It has tons of potenial.

You give to the world when you're giving your best to somebody else.

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frozen[comment please] - by srijantje - 01-28-2010, 02:06 AM

RE: frozen[comment please] - by billy - 01-28-2010, 06:10 AM

RE: frozen[comment please] - by srijantje - 01-28-2010, 10:53 AM

RE: frozen[comment please] - by srijantje - 01-28-2010, 11:25 PM

RE: frozen[comment please] - by . . . . - 01-29-2010, 01:15 AM

RE: frozen[comment please] - by srijantje - 01-29-2010, 12:04 PM

RE: frozen[comment please] - by addy - 02-01-2010, 03:13 PM

RE: frozen[comment please] - by srijantje - 02-02-2010, 07:00 PM

RE: frozen[comment please] - by Benny2guns - 02-03-2010, 03:38 AM

RE: frozen[comment please] - by billy - 03-30-2010, 08:09 PM

RE: frozen[comment please] - by frenkelwilliams1234 - 03-30-2010, 06:26 PM

RE: frozen[comment please] - by srijantje - 03-30-2010, 07:24 PM

RE: frozen[comment please] - by DUBLIN5 - 03-30-2010, 06:52 PM

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