Stars (revision)
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(11-07-2026, 11:05 AM)matsunosuperfan Wrote:  Stars

fall through the park. This evening, it’s enough
to watch them fade into the night’s bare music
off between the branches chapped

and glorified with frost. He leans into his lover's coat,
a quick kiss on the lips. They look like they've been doing this  // looked like...doing this for weeks - definitely a recognizable position  :-)
for weeks. Tucked behind the fountain where the birds

no longer come to drink, a whisper-fingered hustler  // 'whisper-fingered hustler' is a keeper
palms another six of hearts. The shorter boy
holds out a dollar—shy, almost reluctant,

then they run, leaving a trail of laughter
thick enough to eat.


- past versions. Thx to Busker for excellent notes on this one
Magic

Walking through the park tonight, I feel like rotten milk
watching a pretty couple watch the stars
dance to their own music. It's winter cold

early this year; he leans into his lover's coat
like some Buddhist tree falling, slow
and mindless, irreversible.  A quick kiss

on the lips.
They look like they've been doing this
for weeks.

Tucked behind the fountain
where the birds no longer come to drink,
a whisper-fingered hustler

palms another six of hearts.
I catch the look they give each other
—sly, almost reluctant

to acknowledge what they've witnessed here
behind their mother's backs, then off
they run, leaving a trail of laughter

thick enough to eat. A breadcrumb
for the moon, two dollars
shaking in the wind. I know a good magician

never tells, so I don't even bother
troubling the man to ask
how anyone pulls it off:

standing there exposed,
lying to their faces
openly

and making people want it,
making being fooled the point.

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Messages In This Thread
Stars (revision) - by matsunosuperfan - 11-07-2026, 11:05 AM
RE: Magic - by busker - 11-07-2026, 01:38 PM
RE: Magic - by matsunosuperfan - 11-07-2026, 01:58 PM
RE: Magic - by purplie - 11-07-2026, 07:20 PM
RE: Magic - by matsunosuperfan - 11-09-2026, 06:32 AM
RE: Magic - by robdaley - 11-11-2026, 11:43 PM
RE: Stars (revision) - by purplie - 11-13-2026, 01:02 PM
RE: Stars (revision) - by busker - Yesterday, 05:52 AM



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