11-09-2026, 06:44 PM
Revisiting this, I think there's still room for productive compression:
Childhood fears
in the moon's ____ land (room now to invent with a modifier)
Not of night but dawn, upending past dreams
the language is very classical and rich, I think fewer prepositions is actually better
Childhood fears
in the moon's ____ land (room now to invent with a modifier)
Not of night but dawn, upending past dreams
the language is very classical and rich, I think fewer prepositions is actually better

