Magic
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(11-07-2026, 07:20 PM)purplie Wrote:  
(11-07-2026, 11:05 AM)matsunosuperfan Wrote:  Magic

Walking through the park tonight, I feel like rotten milk
watching a pretty couple watch the stars
dance to their own music. It's winter cold
...
Another riddle :-)  This one I'm having a hard time decoding. 

Many of the enjambments seem to be unmotivated.
That's a great formal critique, I have been noticing myself using enjambment almost by default lately. Thanks for calling my attention to it
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Magic - by matsunosuperfan - 11-07-2026, 11:05 AM
RE: Magic - by busker - 11-07-2026, 01:38 PM
RE: Magic - by matsunosuperfan - 11-07-2026, 01:58 PM
RE: Magic - by purplie - 11-07-2026, 07:20 PM
RE: Magic - by matsunosuperfan - 11-09-2026, 06:32 AM



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