Bubble Bush
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(11-09-2026, 02:33 AM)milo Wrote:  
(11-09-2026, 01:55 AM)robdaley Wrote:  She kneels in the long grass, hidden
with the landmines.
Picking a leaf stalk, she teases it open --
a sheen of sap swells.
With brimming brown eyes, she blows
a bubble, big as a bomb.
As forces push out, it floats
through brittle air.
So the grass is hidden ? How do you hide grass?
Hi Milo, lol I have amended. Smile
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Bubble Bush - by robdaley - 11-09-2026, 01:55 AM
RE: Bubble Bush - by milo - 11-09-2026, 02:33 AM
RE: Bubble Bush - by robdaley - 11-09-2026, 03:19 AM
RE: Bubble Bush - by milo - 11-09-2026, 03:34 AM
RE: Bubble Bush - by matsunosuperfan - 11-09-2026, 04:01 AM



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