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11-03-2026, 02:16 AM
(05-27-2026, 12:03 AM)wasellajam Wrote: UnpredictableWell done on form-enacts-meaning. The rhyme "careens" unpredictably from line to line. The siblings never know when they'll see each other again. And each set of rhyming lines, taken by themselves, forms a little mini-poem, all the little mini-poems woven together successfully. I won't ask whether that was intentional. |
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Unpredictable - by wasellajam - 05-27-2026, 12:03 AM
RE: Unpredictable - by matsunosuperfan - 05-27-2026, 04:14 AM
RE: Unpredictable - by wasellajam - 05-27-2026, 04:44 AM
RE: Unpredictable - by matsunosuperfan - 05-27-2026, 08:37 AM
RE: Unpredictable - by milo - 05-27-2026, 10:00 AM
RE: Unpredictable - by wasellajam - 05-27-2026, 10:09 AM
RE: Unpredictable - by dukealien - 05-27-2026, 10:25 AM
RE: Unpredictable - by wasellajam - 05-27-2026, 11:00 AM
RE: Unpredictable - by JohnS - 05-27-2026, 06:02 PM
RE: Unpredictable - by wasellajam - 05-27-2026, 06:54 PM
RE: Unpredictable - by JohnS - 05-27-2026, 07:51 PM
RE: Unpredictable - by wasellajam - 05-27-2026, 08:06 PM
RE: Unpredictable - by purplie - 11-03-2026, 02:16 AM
RE: Unpredictable - by wasellajam - 11-03-2026, 04:38 AM
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