1 hour ago
The first and second stanzas mean nothing to me (quite apart from trying unsuccsessfully to tease out meaning, I'm deeply worried by the grammar). The third and fourth stanzas stand alone as a interesting image (a poem in their own right?) but the clarity might be improved by some additional punctuation.
"Whenever you see reference to a new paradigm you should always, under all circumstances, take cover" J. K. Galbraith, The Observer, 21 June 1998