Today, 05:07 AM
edit;
Immersed in high-res AI video
outside irrelevancies fade
leaving only a driftwood cabin
by a sunny sea somewhere–
no storms, a little evening fog
and black nights crowded with
cool stars too far away to bother.
Only endless dunes unmarked
white sand on which to draw
with a found crab claw
bare feet finding firmness
made up of all those grains
which will obligingly erase
each verse committed to them.
And inside, desiccated
by salt wind, no book of psalms
or numbers, three-view plans
of objects with dimensions grown
irrelevant from long disuse
right-angles absent, pages merged
with fading ink and brushing fingertips.
But now no key-string words produce
that soft-addictive, cool-seductive place
of surface vision, shores of no return
and whispered peace. It was
a sample.
Thanks to both critics. As suggested, I merged in the theme of this being an AI video, or inspired by one. And the replacement tailpiece is sort of real: I've tried to find that particular video again and failed. It was just a come-on.
Immersed in high-res AI video
outside irrelevancies fade
leaving only a driftwood cabin
by a sunny sea somewhere–
no storms, a little evening fog
and black nights crowded with
cool stars too far away to bother.
Only endless dunes unmarked
white sand on which to draw
with a found crab claw
bare feet finding firmness
made up of all those grains
which will obligingly erase
each verse committed to them.
And inside, desiccated
by salt wind, no book of psalms
or numbers, three-view plans
of objects with dimensions grown
irrelevant from long disuse
right-angles absent, pages merged
with fading ink and brushing fingertips.
But now no key-string words produce
that soft-addictive, cool-seductive place
of surface vision, shores of no return
and whispered peace. It was
a sample.
Thanks to both critics. As suggested, I merged in the theme of this being an AI video, or inspired by one. And the replacement tailpiece is sort of real: I've tried to find that particular video again and failed. It was just a come-on.
Non-practicing atheist

