Haiku (when I'm sad and heavy)
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(11 hours ago)matsunosuperfan Wrote:  Haiku

When I'm sad and heavy
rain falls in the street, I smile
watching my dog run
“Sad and heavy” is the sort of abstraction that is the opposite of haiku
Rain falls in the street
My dog runs:
I smile.

Would be closer to the spirit, though it too is horrible
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RE: Haiku (when I'm sad and heavy) - by busker - 11 hours ago



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