1 hour ago
(Today, 06:12 AM)matsunosuperfan Wrote: Haikuthe abstraction of 'worthy of remembering' throws me off.
Dogwood flowers somewhere
worthy of remembering
the weight of your hand
something like Dogwood....somwhere: / I remember / the weight of your hand (syllable count aside) would be more akin to the immediate 'picture' that haiku paints (though I personally don't like the form)