Yesterday, 03:47 PM
Hi Matsun, I misspelled anthropophagi, which I’ve now corrected
Your first point about “to know ‘em” is bang on. Yeah, it’s a terrible way to end S1 but I couldn’t think of anything else
I’m aggrieved that you didn’t like the varying numbers on a spreadsheet. They’re so variable.
The final bit about Mary is just random, but I liked it. It’s the kernel of a whole new poem.
Your first point about “to know ‘em” is bang on. Yeah, it’s a terrible way to end S1 but I couldn’t think of anything else
I’m aggrieved that you didn’t like the varying numbers on a spreadsheet. They’re so variable.
The final bit about Mary is just random, but I liked it. It’s the kernel of a whole new poem.