Pain Release

[PoMo]

untouchable but able to be spoken to - great contrast and opening to the poem
teasingly stroking me without laying a hand on me - the "me" could be removed to make it more poignant 
how to handle it
love? lust?
or just infatuation.... - works well 
around the boys i claim its fabrication
throw that 5 up claim the mac for every flag and nation - very rap like 
tell em my hearts crap its kind of useless
but if you slow the bar down you'll see i really said
my heart's crap it's kind of used less - doesn't flow as well as it could from the prior flag and nation line , also could cut out "crap" 
it's a confused mess - no need for it's?

i think about her and the heart breaks
but she's the method to my madness
the reason for me breathing - again no need for me?
the love i'll never have again
even though i never had her once..... - last two lines are interesting and a strong point in the poem

the poem has a strong start and ending but loses its theme and congruity in the middle portion. I believe it can also be cleaned up to be a bit more sharp and poignant. Overall it has potential.