09-26-2026, 10:43 AM
(09-25-2026, 07:25 PM)Magpie Wrote:Implied: "this is not a haiku"(06-30-2026, 01:20 AM)matsunosuperfan Wrote: It’s never enough! I cry,Why have you called it a haiku? Is that the joke?
watching the kitten move a q-tip
in and out of my shoe.
That a haiku is not enough?
Regardless, it is an excellent image and a good use of enjambment.
You could turn it into a haiku/senryu but it wouldn't be as good.
curious why you come to this conclusion

thank you for reading i appreciate the feedback and kind words

