Haiku (It's never enough!)
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(09-25-2026, 07:25 PM)Magpie Wrote:  
(06-30-2026, 01:20 AM)matsunosuperfan Wrote:  It’s never enough! I cry,
watching the kitten move a q-tip
in and out of my shoe.
Why have you called it a haiku? Is that the joke?
That a haiku is not enough?

Regardless, it is an excellent image and a good use of enjambment.
You could turn it into a haiku/senryu but it wouldn't be as good.
Implied: "this is not a haiku"
curious why you come to this conclusion Smile

thank you for reading i appreciate the feedback and kind words
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Messages In This Thread
Haiku (It's never enough!) - by matsunosuperfan - 06-30-2026, 01:20 AM
RE: Haiku (It's never enough!) - by Magpie - 09-25-2026, 07:25 PM
RE: Haiku (It's never enough!) - by matsunosuperfan - 09-26-2026, 10:43 AM
RE: Haiku (It's never enough!) - by Magpie - 09-26-2026, 12:59 PM
RE: Haiku (It's never enough!) - by brynmawr1 - 09-26-2026, 11:38 AM
RE: Haiku (It's never enough!) - by milo - 09-26-2026, 11:51 AM



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