Condolences
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This is really good

“ Your scythe’s grown dull, old Harvester–
it cuts the bloom of grasses raggedly
and some heads not at all, they merely bend
as if a moaning breeze had passed”

Recalls Hyperion, almost

I don’t think pestilence was a separate horseman, but the club is a nice touch
Though when I think of it, I see Bojack horseman’s like characters sitting around shooting the breeze
The rider has gone, but the horse lives on
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Condolences - by dukealien - 4 hours ago
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