9 hours ago
(9 hours ago)Bunx Wrote:been in some workshops with local stud Jaz Sufi lately, she likes to lead with "hot spots and cold spots" I think it's great practice(Yesterday, 10:31 PM)Todd Wrote: I used to do a lot of intensive critiques, but over time I felt it was probably too much, a lot of it subjective. I was worried that I was giving them the equivalent of a line reading in acting.This is some awesome insight. I've question whether pointing out strengths in content is crit at all, and avoided that kind of feedback.
I also started to notice the things that actually mattered when I received critique were just knowing what was hitting, what wasn’t hitting. Mostly, I was paying attention to the lines no one commented on, because if they were just transitional filler, I wanted to fix them.
So it affected how I think about critique. I’m not even sure what method I’d use these days to approach poems with the goal of being helpful to the writer.

