v3. Disembodied
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matsuno,

I'm holding on stubbornly to that first stanza. I added more to it, even though we've been talking of omitting that first stanza. I promise I'm not ignoring your feedback. Thank you for sticking with me on this one.
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v3. Disembodied - by alonso ramoran - 08-13-2026, 03:28 AM
RE: In-Between - by matsunosuperfan - 08-13-2026, 08:34 AM
RE: In-Between - by alonso ramoran - 08-20-2026, 01:36 AM
RE: In-Between - by matsunosuperfan - 08-20-2026, 11:56 AM
RE: v2. Disembodied - by matsunosuperfan - 09-15-2026, 12:34 AM
RE: v3. Disembodied - by alonso ramoran - 1 hour ago



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