Because I once loved you there
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(05-27-2026, 10:00 AM)busker Wrote:  Apologies if I've posted this before, perhaps in a NaPM. It was sitting in my drafts for a long time awaiting rediscovery.

Because I once loved you there

Because I once loved you there
London's precious to me.
The poems written about you there 
were really letters to me.

Love is the only foolish
adventuring we do -
no scraps with a ghostly, ghoulish,
pirate clipper’s crew

are had in life, spent sourly
making bandit barons kings.
Some places keep their pearly 
moon white angels’ wings

because I loved you. Unaware,
like ghosts and ghouls, you’ll haunt me there.
Very nice.  I did find the breaking of sentences between stanzas unnecessary and a bit jarring.
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Messages In This Thread
Because I once loved you there - by busker - 05-27-2026, 10:00 AM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by milo - 05-27-2026, 10:02 AM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by busker - 05-27-2026, 10:04 AM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by milo - 05-27-2026, 10:05 AM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by busker - 05-27-2026, 08:06 PM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by brynmawr1 - 05-29-2026, 12:34 PM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by busker - 05-30-2026, 08:21 PM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by Bitnee - 09-11-2026, 06:51 AM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by ouroboros - 09-15-2026, 09:56 AM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by busker - 09-15-2026, 02:15 PM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by milo - 09-15-2026, 07:50 PM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by milo - 09-16-2026, 07:38 AM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by busker - 09-16-2026, 07:53 AM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by Bruce V - 09-16-2026, 12:12 AM



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