The sun round like a bun

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I'll admit I'm having trouble making sense of this but there's something unique about it. It starts as this Dr Suess / Shel Silverstein-esque childlike rhyming, and ends with a foreboding prophecy about the end of the world. If it's meant to be funny/jarring I'd say it's somewhat effective. If not, I'm not sure how the first few lines serve the ending. My favorite phrase here is "all the Qurans textless." The concept of religious text disappearing as a representation of abandoning all hope is cool. I would say the piece needs a bit of work on cohesion, specificity, and intention. What exactly are you trying to communicate/evoke in the reader?

Thanks for sharing. I feel significantly more prepared for... whatever is about to happen.