Can AI write a good poem?
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I liked ChatGPT's best; it contained some insights decently well expressed.  Gemini tried a little too hard with the rhymes, and I think they compromised its poem overall.  Maybe it wasn't that great even without them.  Claude's was a bit disconnected, which is OK, but fell a bit short of ChatGPT's for being a completed whole; it was taking some wild swings trying for "excellence," or just low-probability gates in AI terms.

Yours (@matsunosuperfan) was swinging for the far wall while constrained by word inventory.  It had some jagged edges and mismatched juxtapositions - unexpected, maybe fresh, but I didn't like it quite as well as ChatGPT's.

What I found interesting is that only Claude used the you-and-your formulation while the other two began and proceeded with "we."  Which is to say, Claude is (pseduo) aware that it's not human, looking at humanity from the outside, while the others feel or pretend to be part of the human race along with us, or at least express themselves (as it were) in that manner.  Whether any of the three Pinocchios *wants* to be a real little boy, or thinks he's already one, is easy to overthink.
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Can AI write a good poem? - by matsunosuperfan - Yesterday, 03:34 PM
RE: Can AI write a good poem? - by dukealien - 7 hours ago



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