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[matsunosuperfan]

Really find your take on this piece of work insightful. I am new to this style of writting but even upon completion I felt something lacking. How to say a thing without being too direct and leaving sufficient desire for the reader to want to pursue is a new path for me to explore.  

I will attempt another way ...thank you for your time

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The second reply by matsuno highlighted my inexperience in structural forming when trying to carry a story.
I find your piece different but too formal for me but none the less its educational.
I shall attempt different paths and seeing a similar completed piece helps me when starting from scratch.

Thank you for your time

I'm so glad you found the exercise of some use. It is an intriguing piece. I look forward to seeing what else you do with it.