yield

[milo]

let it sit for a while and found more to appreciate. 


the trunk, the hips each branch a jaw, Some
sex to push the apple blossom

for me this is the highlight in terms of sound, image and language-making
requesting more like this <3

so I will lift my cup alone
and let it now unyoke my stone

by contrast, less of this please. YKWIM?

that particular technique is one I reach for frequently and the other line you caleed out was actually a late add to reconcile an earlier dangling plot line so perhaps I need to reconsider.

Thanks for offering additional feedback.