One piece epic intro test

[matsunosuperfan]

Exploding from the barrel, Luffy's stretchy
rubber arms plow through Alvira's pirate 
henchmen, terrifying them. But Koby,
her young slave, amazed, gives food to this
new kid, whose only mission is
to be the 'King of Pirates!' Shouting,  laughing, 
jabbing him about not following 
his own dreams, coward Koby watches Luffy
pound Alvira's crew to smithereens,
inspiring him to join Marines.

I think it's pretty dope, smooth meter, good use of enjambment, syntax is provocative and lively, gang gang