Needs Adjustment
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(06-03-2026, 04:18 AM)wasellajam Wrote:  
(06-03-2026, 03:53 AM)dukealien Wrote:  Needs Adjustment


Water rattles in the sink,
ice cubes avalanche in freezer;
wind-whipped branches saw on siding,
rain drum-serenades the roof.
Passing truck-tires lion-bellow,
wet shoes porpoise-squeal on floors;
voices blare from distant tables,
I hear birds no eye can spy
chirping loudly under gables:
hearing aid is set too high.
Big Grin I hear you  Big Grin
Well done, I can hear each line.Trochee brain much? Hysterical
Not so much without comedic intent, but I do hiawathabit.
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Needs Adjustment - by dukealien - 06-03-2026, 03:53 AM
RE: Needs Adjustment - by wasellajam - 06-03-2026, 04:18 AM
RE: Needs Adjustment - by dukealien - 06-03-2026, 10:30 PM



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