Whale Fall - Edit 1
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Thanks for reading & your thoughts, River, I made most of your suggestions, just moved devour up, I think it's a better line break.

I think it's cleaner now.
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Whale Fall - Edit 1 - by Wjames - 05-11-2026, 11:22 AM
RE: Whale Fall - by RiverNotch - 05-11-2026, 05:15 PM
RE: Whale Fall - by Wjames - Yesterday, 03:40 AM



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