experimental poetry!

[busker]

• )pen the shades grey flowers are good by
  

       .
      : see the now blue unset, red herlips on the hereyes
     i am a mapleseedfalling goodbye
    ; for tofall is tofly is tosayyouaremy
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       love
                 ,

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Questions are welcome!  I know this is a very abnormal poem.  It's inspired by E.E. Cummings' style.  Thanks for reading and/or commenting!

If, as another commenter says, the dots are seeds, then there should be more of them.
I don't think it's quite working. The style should embellish the poem, not serve as a distraction. If a puzzle, the juice should be worth the squeeze