experimental poetry!

[Sean Puckett]

[*])pen the shades grey flowers are good by
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       .     Are the punctuations the maple seeds falling? I get that feeling 
      : see the now blue unset, red herlips on the hereyes
     i am a mapleseedfalling goodbye The ‘mapleseedfalling’ definitely feels like falling
    ; for tofall is tofly is tosayyouaremy
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       love it just doesn’t land for me. To generic a payoff
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Questions are welcome!  I know this is a very abnormal poem.  It's inspired by E.E. Cummings' style.  Thanks for reading and/or commenting!

It does have an abnormal feel. But I’ve always been a fan of “abnormal” and experimental. Like a little puzzle to figure out. Are the punctuations the “flowering seeds falling” from flower opening, down the poem?


-Addendum- It seems in my edits to try to get things just right, I have somehow completely butchered the beginning of the poem and do not know how to fix it. If this is a problem I will just redo my post. My apologies. I’ll just tap my forehead a bit firmly on this tabletop.