Yesterday, 12:34 PM
(05-27-2026, 10:00 AM)busker Wrote: Apologies if I've posted this before, perhaps in a NaPM. It was sitting in my drafts for a long time awaiting rediscovery.Hi Busker,
Because I once loved you there
Because I once loved you there
London's precious to me.
The poems written about you there
were really letters to me.
Love is the only foolish
adventuring we do - this is my favorite line, really good
no scraps with a ghostly, ghoulish, not sure how this fits in, but it's a good image
pirate clipper’s crew
are had in life, spent sourly
making bandit barons kings.
Some places keep their pearly
moon white angels’ wings If I were to chose I would cut angel's first, then pearly, but one needs to go.
because I loved you. Unaware,
like ghosts and ghouls, you’ll haunt me there.
I am glad that you dug this out. Above, I have highlighted (excellent spelling bee word by the way) the parts that I felt worked the best. I don't mean to suggest that you can just cut the rest and it will work. Some adjustments are necessary but I just wanted to show what I thought the backbone of the poem is to me.

