05-27-2026, 06:02 PM
This is a really well executed exercise in meter and rhyme.
I wonder if the effort to maintain that hasn't limited your options so that we see irrelevant content and, to a small extent, Yoda speak, creeping in. It'll take some skill and wit to bring out the full potential of this idea, but worth it I think.
You've had excellent critique from others more experienced than me, so I'll leave it there.
I wonder if the effort to maintain that hasn't limited your options so that we see irrelevant content and, to a small extent, Yoda speak, creeping in. It'll take some skill and wit to bring out the full potential of this idea, but worth it I think.
You've had excellent critique from others more experienced than me, so I'll leave it there.