Because I once loved you there
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(Yesterday, 10:02 AM)milo Wrote:  
(Yesterday, 10:00 AM)busker Wrote:  Apologies if I've posted this before, perhaps in a NaPM. It was sitting in my drafts for a long time awaiting rediscovery.

Because I once loved you there

Because I once loved you there
London's precious to me.
The poems written about you there 
were really letters to me.

Love is the only foolish
adventuring we do -
no scraps with a ghostly, ghoulish,
pirate clipper’s crew

are had in life, spent sourly
making bandit barons kings.
Some places keep their pearly 
moon white angels’ wings

because I loved you. Unaware,
like ghosts and ghouls, you’ll haunt me there.
if you are wondering if the padding is obvious, the answer is a resounding yes
'making bandit barons kings' is a gem of a line, c'mon!!  Big Grin
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Because I once loved you there - by busker - Yesterday, 10:00 AM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by milo - Yesterday, 10:02 AM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by busker - Yesterday, 10:04 AM
RE: Because I once loved you there - by milo - Yesterday, 10:05 AM



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