Haiku
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(7 hours ago)JohnS Wrote:  spun with silver thread,
strung with pearls of morning dew -
the fly doesn't see
As a bit of a spider-fancier, I give this full marks.  Wondering about the em dash:  I think it's correct, there's more than just pearls the fly's compound eyes miss.
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